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Frodo
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 Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 3:27 pm Post subject: Frodo's Daily Short |
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Yeah so every day I'll add another short story (writen by me) for you to read.
Today's story:
The Chosen One
part 1
Rocks flew all over the place, knocking into other rocks and throwing sand. They were moved by a mysterious invisible force, like a terrifying whirlwind.
Through the racket, a voice could be heard. It sounded like a teenage boy, with sand in his mouth. "Next Time!" It screamed.
A blur of arms, legs, and clothes scurried away in a second, kicking up sand as it sped over the desert.
The whirlwind of rocks and sand slowed, and a shape could be seen. It also looked to be a boy, his arms high in the air, as if commanding something. His blond hair was frazzled and dirty with sand.
The boy's expression hardened. "You cannot defeat me." He wispered. His barely visible eyebrows tilted downward, and he squinted his eyelids tightly together. "I am The Chosen One."
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Jadecavy
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| Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 1:03 am Post subject: |
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Although I can't understand it the story that well, great work anyways on the details and the parts I can understand!
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hurleyind
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 2:36 am Post subject: |
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lol win :D
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| Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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...Yes, Daily...
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